Friday, June 10, 2011

Pt. 1 of Ch. 3: Diamonds and Gold


                                                       Pt. 1


             Josiah awoke in a strange place. He wasn't positive of where he was, but he had a pretty good idea. He had awoken on a bench in the middle of a pure white town. Directly in front of him, across a road, was a great water fountain. He watched the water fall into the basin at the base. The water glimmered like diamonds. All of a sudden, a small child ran up to him, tugged on his jacket and said "Come! Come! Moses wants to see you!"  Bewildered, Josiah followed. 
             The boy brought Josiah to a great building, and motioned for Josiah to enter. So he did. There was Moses, sitting in a lounge chair at the opposite side of the room. He stood as Josiah entered, greeted him, and motioned for him to sit. Josiah sat. Josiah asked why he had been summoned here.  Moses told Josiah. The plan that was part of a greater plan that was part of a greater plan that was part of a greater plan that was all under the watchfulness of Christ Jesus had not yet been fulfilled when Josiah was killed. Josiah played a major part in that plan. And so Moses cast Josiah back down to earth.


            Josiah awoke, feeling fuzzy. He was on his bed, in his room, and yet he wasn't on his bed in his room. He knew he had just been killed by Mr. Forest, but had no recollection of the events that had happened afterwards. Maybe he had been found and revived in a hospital? That must have been it. And so that was what Josiah chose to believe. He jumped from his bed and ran to the front door. It was bright and sunny outside, and there was no evidence of anybody else being there. Josiah ran back to his room, counted to 3, and was gone.



3 comments:

  1. Interesting way to continue the story. Did you actually intend to kill Josiah, or were you just annoyed not everyone commented on your blog? Because this chapter seemed a little rushed, like it hadn't been planned out.

    Or is it planned out and I'm just paranoid.

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  2. Oooh, that is creepy! O.O The white town is an interesting idea! I don't know, it just sounds cool. x) lol

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  3. it was kind of thought out. I felt more rushed the more I procrastinated :P I intended to kill Josiah, and I intended to bring him back, if that's what you're asking Daniel. Elisa, the white town: I always pictured heaven as a place of rest, beauty, but above all, I pictured it as pure white. So yeah, "He didn't know where he was, but he had a pretty good idea" yeah, he was pretty sure he was in heaven. :P

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